Rapture's first thought would be something along the lines of "Son of @#%*. And he was annoyed with me wanting an 'adventurer's pass'?!" Her next, not fueled by annoyance thought, would be "Probably not... he's really not that sort of guy. It's probably yet more bad press Myra is trying to spread about us, in the hopes that my reputation will get so bad Jake will be forced to stop seeing me or that she can convince him that its easier to enter into a loveless marriage than it will be to have such a bad reputation himself that he'll never be able to take over from his father."
And of course they were having a fling... that we met at same bar is annoying but unsurprising (by the way, does the Mystran Bar have a name?)... when you find a club you like, you're more likely to go, therefore you're more likely to meet people there.
Also, "Recent Negotiations"?
Followed by worrying more about what the "formal lunch" is about. She'll wait to see what his news is, but she'll want to discuss this point with him. Is it more lies from Myrna or is his father than unimpressed with his son's "sowing wild oats" behavior?
Of course, she's still in love with him! Rapture would bet that he didn't dare to treat her like a 'Bought Woman' when they were together. And of course she'd be pissed at Rapture... She may have (depending on how long ago the original breakup occured) been the woman that Myrna thinks Jake 'cheated with'.
Speaking of which, have you deliberately not mentioned how long ago they broke up? Especially with 'Recent Negotiations' there is a huge difference between a week before he met Rapture and six months before he met her!
Thanks for the info. Rapture will start writing in the book again, although she will be much more guarded in what she says (he could just be keeping quiet so that he thinks she won't think that's he's still reading
).